My House is My Beautiful Places
Do you know beautiful place in this world? I think is my house.
My house is beautiful place for me and for my family, because in my house make me comford and relax, my house is not luxurious but it's make me happy and give me happiness. And there are many beautiful and bad memories. My house is simple house but very cozy place for me and my family.
My house consist with three bedroom. In the first room it's my bedroom there are in beside living room, and my mother's room it's beside small mosque. in the middle room is for watching TV and mix with family room also dining room. I have one bathroom near with my kitchen. My house has enough furnished.
If my mother have done her work usually she is watching TV with me or telling each other about my activities or her activities.
I love my house so much because it is my beautiful places where i was born until i adult and my parents give me loving care so much
lutfiah..it's nice houses.
BalasHapusand "I think is my house" you less "It"
I think it is my house.
1,,,, because in my house make me comford and relax,
BalasHapusthose are verb.. change to adjective (comfortable and relaxed)
n what you mean with this "in my house".... you can write my house without (in)
2,,,,In the first room (,)it's my bedroom(.) there are in beside living room, and my mother's room(,) it's beside small mosque.
3,,,,If my mother have (has) done her work(,)
4,,,,I love my house so much(,) because
5,,,, i adult (i am adult)
because in my house make me comford and relax = because i feel comfort and relax in my house. "comford" is false, the true is " comfort "
BalasHapusin the first room it's my bedroom there are in beside living room = the first room is my bed room, it's beside the living room ( more simple right..??)
and my mother's room it's beside small mosque = and my mother's is beside the small mosque.
please make the sentence in the simple sentence, i mean make the sentence it can be understood by the reader.
more carefully with your write. after (.) you must write with capital letter :)
BalasHapusThanks for your comment all my friends may be i will becareful before a write,, 😊
BalasHapus