Selasa, 14 Oktober 2014

Mr been getting up late for dentist

When his beker ring lickety split but he’s don’t care about that. And when all of beker is not ring, mr been get up. Maybe he’s forget for dentist because he get up calmly. And then he put his great coat in cupboard, he does’t know that there is note for dentist at 9 a.m. until he know his note. He fells shocked and confused. Finally he doing his activity in the car. For example : he change clothes, change trousers, and toothbush till he does’t concentration for drive a car. He also take a stone and put in rem for make it easier to change trousers. And there are one accident when mr been circulating on the way. It is so funny I think. In the long run, mr been arrived  in dentist but there are one woman look up and down. He aware for his trousers still adhere.......


3 komentar:

  1. If you use simple present In your sentence "He get up calmly" you less s. :"Gets"

    BalasHapus
  2. 1,,,ring (rings)lickety split but he’s don’t (he doesn't) care about that
    2,,,he’s forget ( he forgets) for dentist
    3,,,he put (puts) his great coat in cupboard,

    great posting,,,,,,
    but please check again your grammer sis...thank

    BalasHapus
  3. hahaha...your posting is the same posting with your partner in group's posting..and of course i'll give same comment.. please check the grammar

    BalasHapus